Post by carol on Mar 16, 2013 23:15:17 GMT -5
Since some of you were lucky enough to never meet that bitch, imma give you some family history.
FIRST. Let me explain to you how dumb this bitch was. Her characters were straight SUES. Not even half way trying. And then the cunt stole from me.
Nicole pointed out this mess to me: foxhurstacademy.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=inactive&action=display&thread=318
Which was wayy too similar to Kegan and I got amp.
This is the message I sent her:
She came back with some "I could sue you for bullying" shit and I was like "k. have fun."
Oh and just for shits and giggles, look at her other fuckball characters and laugh.
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FIRST. Let me explain to you how dumb this bitch was. Her characters were straight SUES. Not even half way trying. And then the cunt stole from me.
Nicole pointed out this mess to me: foxhurstacademy.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=inactive&action=display&thread=318
Which was wayy too similar to Kegan and I got amp.
This is the message I sent her:
You know, I think it's funny the similarities between Kegan and Shane. So funny that I decided to go through and pick out some of my...favorites.
- Kegan: "By most standards, Kegan is attractive"
- Shane: "Shane is pretty attractive"
*Hmmm... sounds pretty familiar to me.
- K: "He has gray-green eyes, with a little circle of gold around the pupil, the kind of eyes that tell stories with each blink"
- S: "Carmel brown eyes that can melt someone's mind to where they get weak at the knees"
*Making a comparison to something his eyes can do? Oh, what a coincidence. And you spelled caramel wrong.
- K: "His teeth are straight thanks to three years of braces and a retainer at night"
- S: "his teeth are perfect thanks to invisaline"
*By the way, saying something on your character is "perfect" isn't really a good writing tool and it'll make people laugh at you.
- K: "Generally, he can be found wearing a snap back, t-shirt, jeans/shorts, and some kind of colorful high top shoe."
- S: "He likes wearing snap-backs, t-shirts, jeans, sneakers"
*Really? Really? Like...you could have tried harder.
- K: "He’s the kind of person you can go to if you want to vent, but don’t ask him for advice — he has enough problems of his own, he really can’t help you."
- S: " He gives crappy advice but has a comforting affect on people."
*Didn't your English teacher EVER teach you about plagiarism? You paraphrased me, and gave me no credit — but then again if you're going to STEAL from someone, you wouldn't give them credit. If this were published, I could sue you for that.
- K: "Kegan is a player in the worst form of the word."
- S: "He was a true player."
*lol you're basically taking my sentences and dumbing them down. Four for you, Glenn Coco!
Basically, I think it's pretty obvious that you stole from me. Some of the example are obvious paraphrases of things I said about Kegan. If you don't know what paraphrasing is, here let Miriam Webster tell you all about it: to restate something using other words, especially in order to make it simpler or shorter. You took my words, and twisted them into some deflated mess. This is creative writing, stealing from someone isn't very creative.
I am so offended, I can't believe someone would do that to me. What kind of person are you? I put my heart into that, and you came along and took that from me. And then you were dumb enough to post it on the same website I'm on. AND I'M A FUCKING MODERATOR. What were you thinking?
I had to remove Kegan's back story from the site for my safety — that was a portion of my book, and I can't risk having that paraphrased into some mess by someone as incompetent as you. This is the most disrespectful thing that has ever happened to me. I love and care for my characters, especially Kegan and this feels like a personal attack.
It's also a problem that you can't spell for shit. I mean goodness, just download Google chrome if you're that lazy! And your grammar...you're spitting on the English language! It's sad that people like you are allowed on the internet.
I have spoken to the administrators, and I sincerely hope you get kicked off. We could look past your grammar simply for the pleasure of seeing you make a fool of yourself, but it is just so violating that you would actually steal from someone on here who was nothing but nice to you.
- Kegan: "By most standards, Kegan is attractive"
- Shane: "Shane is pretty attractive"
*Hmmm... sounds pretty familiar to me.
- K: "He has gray-green eyes, with a little circle of gold around the pupil, the kind of eyes that tell stories with each blink"
- S: "Carmel brown eyes that can melt someone's mind to where they get weak at the knees"
*Making a comparison to something his eyes can do? Oh, what a coincidence. And you spelled caramel wrong.
- K: "His teeth are straight thanks to three years of braces and a retainer at night"
- S: "his teeth are perfect thanks to invisaline"
*By the way, saying something on your character is "perfect" isn't really a good writing tool and it'll make people laugh at you.
- K: "Generally, he can be found wearing a snap back, t-shirt, jeans/shorts, and some kind of colorful high top shoe."
- S: "He likes wearing snap-backs, t-shirts, jeans, sneakers"
*Really? Really? Like...you could have tried harder.
- K: "He’s the kind of person you can go to if you want to vent, but don’t ask him for advice — he has enough problems of his own, he really can’t help you."
- S: " He gives crappy advice but has a comforting affect on people."
*Didn't your English teacher EVER teach you about plagiarism? You paraphrased me, and gave me no credit — but then again if you're going to STEAL from someone, you wouldn't give them credit. If this were published, I could sue you for that.
- K: "Kegan is a player in the worst form of the word."
- S: "He was a true player."
*lol you're basically taking my sentences and dumbing them down. Four for you, Glenn Coco!
Basically, I think it's pretty obvious that you stole from me. Some of the example are obvious paraphrases of things I said about Kegan. If you don't know what paraphrasing is, here let Miriam Webster tell you all about it: to restate something using other words, especially in order to make it simpler or shorter. You took my words, and twisted them into some deflated mess. This is creative writing, stealing from someone isn't very creative.
I am so offended, I can't believe someone would do that to me. What kind of person are you? I put my heart into that, and you came along and took that from me. And then you were dumb enough to post it on the same website I'm on. AND I'M A FUCKING MODERATOR. What were you thinking?
I had to remove Kegan's back story from the site for my safety — that was a portion of my book, and I can't risk having that paraphrased into some mess by someone as incompetent as you. This is the most disrespectful thing that has ever happened to me. I love and care for my characters, especially Kegan and this feels like a personal attack.
It's also a problem that you can't spell for shit. I mean goodness, just download Google chrome if you're that lazy! And your grammar...you're spitting on the English language! It's sad that people like you are allowed on the internet.
I have spoken to the administrators, and I sincerely hope you get kicked off. We could look past your grammar simply for the pleasure of seeing you make a fool of yourself, but it is just so violating that you would actually steal from someone on here who was nothing but nice to you.
She came back with some "I could sue you for bullying" shit and I was like "k. have fun."
Oh and just for shits and giggles, look at her other fuckball characters and laugh.
foxhurstacademy.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=inactive&action=display&thread=316
foxhurstacademy.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=inactive&action=display&thread=317